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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-07-26 02:20 PM



ZOOM
26 July 2011

Higher and higher,
elated, she flies
and higher,
cleaving her way
through the cool blue sky
past painted clouds
leaving infinity behind her
like a leaf-shaped speck
into the electrifying free unknown.

Owl

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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
1 posted 2011-07-26 02:25 PM


I liiike this feeling of freedom your poem insprires in me.
It reassures me that all things are possible.
Thank you,
ebonygirl

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-07-27 02:15 AM


When I was a child I was sure I could fly. Maybe if childhood lasted a bit longer I could have. We could fly together.
                               Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2011-07-27 04:00 AM


wish I could 'take flight' !

a most inspired 'penning' !!

Alison
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4 posted 2011-07-31 12:28 PM


Your poetry sure has been flying lately.  Sometimes, I want to be a kite.  I want the string so I can be pulled back in, but I want to fly like this.

Love,
Alison

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