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ebonygirl
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0 posted 2011-07-25 04:16 PM



How Long Has This Been Going On


When, did you first see me?
    
     first,
glimmer in your eyes
     second,
shimmering in your thighs
     third,
the fragrance of my scent
     fourth,
music to your ears
     fifth,
brushed touch against my skin
    
Was it the sixth sense?


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-07-25 08:52 PM


You've made me think.
Thank you for that.


Balladeer
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2 posted 2011-07-25 09:47 PM


The sixth sense always does it
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-07-25 09:54 PM


Neat. Gives the reader plenty to think about. What was it? What registered with you the first time you laid eyes on me? Uh huh. good.

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Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-07-26 10:41 AM


perhaps it was back then
when you were looking at reflections
in the window, wondering
what I was looking at in reflections

very slick and wet ms...seductive in reverb

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-07-26 02:15 PM


Thank you Sunshine, Balladeer, JerryPat2,
and Dark for your comments and read.
Ms. ebony

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-07-30 09:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
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