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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-07-25 08:31 AM


Quite hurt that Balladeer didn't care
about his dinner, Doc
Flew up to Massachusett Nans
and asked to use her wok

Then booked a seaplane flight right back
to "Deers" based on the hunch
that even though his dinner flopped
his good friend might like lunch

The seaplane was a little old
but had to brand new wings
The pilot told Doc to relax
I'm sure I'll land this thing

The only other passenger,
a Chinese clam named Chow
And pretty much you all must know
where this will lead by now

Remember folks it's "Live from PIP"
you only get it here
I'll prob'ly go to hell for this
new wings land clam Chow "deer"


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1 posted 2011-07-25 09:31 AM


How you do it, I don't know.  I don't even like puns, but I am laughing.  I do love clam chowder though and your poems.  You and 'Deer are bringing lots of smiles to PiP.  Thank you.

A

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2011-07-25 10:57 AM


Alison,
Lol, that's makes at least two of us. I'm glad you're enjoying our pointless little joust. Well, I guess Balladeer might be trying to make some point, I'm just not sure what it is, lol.
Doc

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3 posted 2011-07-25 04:38 PM


Here's my problem. I have to actually read these aloud to hear the pun...but then, that makes for part of the fun, especially when taking a break and reading these out loud at the office!


ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-07-25 04:51 PM


Lots of giggles today.
ebonygirl

Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2011-07-25 07:51 PM


Sunshine,
If I read any of this in my office out loud, I'd get fired, and it's my business, lol. I just use my spare time to write it. To some that might be called a paradox, ooh, but, I guess one of me is already too many.
Doc

ebonygirl,
Thanks for giggling along.
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-27-2011 07:22 AM).]

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