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Abe
Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694
Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2011-07-24 03:50 PM



Not Done!

I don’t want to be done
Doing things I love to do
And one of the best things
Is that part, of loving you.

I don’t want to be done
For, I have so much to share
Most, those in my heart
And, how much I’ve come to care.

I don’t want to be done
With, this love I know is true
Not knowing, where it’s going
Though it, will always be with you.

I don’t want to be done
With this life, near its end
Wondering, what lay ahead
Maybe, just around the bend.

I don’t want to be done
So, I’ll keep doing what I do
Just hoping, when I am
That, I will be with you!

Del “Abe” Jones
07.24.2011

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-07-24 10:16 PM


I love your poem, especially your ending, it's so tender and true.
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