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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-07-24 08:07 AM


you were playful with your net full of those sins
catching my arousals as they flew slowly
and were lodged intentionally here and there

you looked away from my eyes during whispers
as you were pooling your assets to purchase
what was left of my freedom to not want to

and you would always have more than enough
to keep me well beyond just being addicted
as if your freckles were subtle invitations

that would draw my mind into your charms
taking me down face forward into my hunger
and leaving me craving more of your ocean

when you were whet sighs in shimmer skin

_____________

daark


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-07-24 10:26 AM


daark, D.S., this is a love poem. Well, er, somewhat. Lustful anyway.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-07-24 03:53 PM


Thanks JP. A bit of both I guess.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-07-24 10:12 PM


Oh boy, how does one pass up your lustful love shimmer stuff.

Ok then, I can do green!     hugs doll~


ebonygirl
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4 posted 2011-07-24 10:15 PM


Nicely done Dark,
Ms. ebony

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-07-24 11:37 PM


Thank you babyblue

____

Ms ebony, thank you for the eyes

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6 posted 2011-07-26 10:33 AM


and you would always have more than enough
to keep me well beyond just being addicted

Though the genders may differ, I think we all have one of those in our past... and no one wanted rehab. *S*

*sigh* indeed! *S*

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-07-26 10:38 AM


ms suthern....yep...I sure could use another one...how about you?  thanks lady..
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