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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-07-21 02:38 PM

Heart

Heart beats

eyes charmed

no cause for alarm.

Let go

something new

adventure awaits.

Winding roads

pause and taste

beauty lies ahead.

Look forward

charmed eyes

you might find

your heart again.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2011-07-21 03:00 PM

Ms ebony

Temptation in abbreviated sampling. Cool moves.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2011-07-21 03:13 PM

Dear Dark,
Smiles and giggles.
Thanks,
Ms. Ebony

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-07-21 03:47 PM

Quality work with your abstracted lines. Very interesting to follow the broken tale to the end.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-07-21 04:12 PM

Thank you Jerrypat2.
I appreciate your comment.
Ms. Ebony

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-07-21 04:45 PM

Welcome dear friend, so glad to see that you have joined PIP, Enjoyed your first post. You Are going to love it here,
Ida

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-07-21 09:24 PM

Ebony,

Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2011-07-21 09:59 PM

Short lines make this poem sweet..they make the theme pop.. and a good theme it is...;-)

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2011-07-21 11:01 PM

Very pretty!

Welcome to the blue sea, ebonygirl~

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

9 posted 2011-07-22 01:52 AM

Positive first post, fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

10 posted 2011-07-22 04:21 PM

Ida, Sunshine, ICE, Blues Serenade and Prasad Nataraj,

Thank you for your comments and encouraging words.

Ebonygirl

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

11 posted 2011-07-22 04:39 PM

Thank you everyone for your comments and welcome.

Ebonygirl

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

12 posted 2011-07-22 05:21 PM

Ida, Sunshine, ICE, Blues Serenade and Prasad Nataraj,

Thank you for your comments and encouraging words.

Ebonygirl

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

13 posted 2011-07-23 02:30 AM

Delightful, ebonygirl! And welcome to Pip! YOu will find it is a wonderful place where everyone will care that you find your heart and that you don't let anyone harm it again.

Owl

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

14 posted 2011-07-23 05:47 PM

Thank you Ms. OwlSA
It has taken a long time to get back.
Heart felt Thank you,
Ebonygirl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2011-07-26 09:23 AM

I like the hope in this. *S* Welcome to Passions!! I look forward to reading more of your work.

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

16 posted 2011-07-26 02:10 PM

Welcome! Lovely post. Looks like pip has yet another big talent now!

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

17 posted 2011-07-26 02:18 PM

Thank you Suthern and Soul drifter,
I appreciate your welcome and the time you took to read my poem.
ebonygirl

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

18 posted 2011-07-30 06:07 AM

I am so glad I stopped by and read this...presently this suits me to a T...jus how adventurous is the only question...

~~~kingsangel~~~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

19 posted 2011-07-30 04:02 PM

an interesting 'write' !

... especially fine ending:

"Look forward

  charmed eyes

  you might find

  your heart again."

applause for this 'penning' !!

welcome to "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea!

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

20 posted 2011-07-30 04:04 PM

Well this is certainly inspirational... I'm glad it made its way back to the top.

Good write.

Michael

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

21 posted 2011-07-30 04:53 PM

Thank you,
Angel4aKing,
secondhanddreampoet,
and Michael,
for taking time to read the poem.
I especially appreciate your words of encouragement.
ebonygirl

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