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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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0 posted 2011-07-20 07:13 PM


heat was a den of inferno,
no fan could settle
luna's heated passion
as she turned a slight
burnt orange as clouds
blending to her graceful
glow. I layed quite still
hoping her affairs would
be at a end so
that the wind could
return
without being jealous
of all the attention.
To bring back her soft gentle
breeze that I truly
desired for. Yet her envy
showed more for she
bared winds of heat,
giving me luna's
steamy passion that
should've been hers
yet was taken
by first glance. Oh
if only it was hers,
she would bare a
sweet breath of cool
air and I can truly
feel refresh for the night.
But alas I must wait
til dawn when the air
is soft, gently, sweet with
luna out of sight. Until
the sun comes burning
in anger of luna's affair
sent from the wind
with
jealously.

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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2011-07-20 08:47 PM


Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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