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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2011-07-20 02:51 PM

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Short gray hair
No paramour
Neighbors gone
To a local bar

No one calls
On the news
The forecast
Threatens snow

Autumn breeze
Evening sky
Ripples on water
Along the shore

A stout old woman
Lifts her heels
To a silent tune
From long ago


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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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1 posted 2011-07-20 06:40 PM

I really enjoyed reading this one.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-07-21 11:19 PM

One of your best, John.
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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
3 posted 2011-07-22 04:43 AM

..you've painted a picture
with words for all to stop
and wonder; enjoyed..
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