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Margherita
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0 posted 2011-07-14 05:20 AM






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Awakening
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Dawn performs light show:

pink hues caress Mother Earth

souls rise with the sun
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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2011-07-14 06:27 AM


lovely capture ms mar...
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-07-14 09:03 AM


What a beautiful photo, Margherita, made more so by your wonderful haiku. Very good.

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3 posted 2011-07-14 01:54 PM


Lovely haiku Margherita. The picture took my breath away.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-07-15 07:43 AM


The photo and poem are perfect complements to each other...breath taking!
Lori

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5 posted 2011-07-15 10:23 AM


fine one !!
Margherita
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6 posted 2011-07-15 06:10 PM


I enjoyed your comments, dear Poet friends, thank you all so much.

Love,
Margherita


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7 posted 2011-07-16 01:37 AM


So lovely, picture and words - from a lovely lady.

xoxoxo
Alison

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8 posted 2011-07-16 10:45 AM


My Swiss mountain world haunts me through life, dear Alison, and I love to dwell in memories sometimes. Who can forget a sunrise?

It is really one of the most uplifting experiences we can enjoy.

Thank you, dear friend, for your loving comment.

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2011-07-20 02:28 PM


The photograph and poem complement each other perfectly... this is absolutely beautiful!
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10 posted 2011-07-21 10:38 PM


Love it!
       Ida

Margherita
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11 posted 2011-07-22 12:46 PM


Thank you both, dear Ruth and dear Ida, for your loving comments.

And good bye for a while.

Love,
Margherita

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12 posted 2011-07-22 04:11 PM


a wonderful "picture",

yann

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13 posted 2011-07-22 04:30 PM


Dear Margherita,

Your poem makes me feel as if I am one of the souls that caresses Mother Earth. What a beautiful visual!
Thank you,
Ebonygirl

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14 posted 2011-07-22 06:13 PM


Ah, with this picture one might thinks sould are given life with the sun.  Beautiful words and pic.


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15 posted 2011-08-16 12:28 PM


Thank you, dear Yann, dear ebonygirl and dear Michael for your loving comments!

Love,
Margherita

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16 posted 2011-08-25 08:18 PM


Marghertia...A pleasure to read this piece. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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17 posted 2011-08-25 11:17 PM


Hi, Margherita-It was so great hearing from you.  I love your poem and the photo is awesome.  I've missed you and everyone so much.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Margherita
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18 posted 2011-08-26 02:36 AM


Such a surprise this morning finding "Awakening" up again! Thank you so much, dear Paul, for enjoying this and telling me so.

And so good to see you here too, dear Faith! We have missed your loving spirit. I do hope you will stay and grace us with your poetic offerings again. Thank you!

Love and joy.
Margherita

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19 posted 2011-08-26 02:57 PM


Margherita
I don’t know anything about mother earth, but I do know about Father God, and I know this is but one of many of His glorious creations, much like you.

Great poetry!!

JL


[This message has been edited by JL (08-26-2011 04:52 PM).]

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20 posted 2011-08-26 03:57 PM


Margherita - Okay! I got my new hiking boots, my bags are packed and I'm ready to go there. Much enjoyed your work here and that picture is inspiring. You did real good Margherita. Namyh
P.S. - Now where did I put that airplane ticket!LOL.

Margherita
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21 posted 2011-08-26 04:07 PM


Dear JL, thank you for such a loving comment, I think we are all very special in His eyes! Glorious heavenly offspring!

Dear Namyh, wonderful program to realize I see! Imagine what it feels like,  to stay on top after the long climbing ... and stand in awe to greet the sun. Find the ticket and do it! Thank you so much!

Love,
Margherita

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22 posted 2011-08-29 01:01 AM


I have always wanted to visit your Swiss Mountain World.  Someday, I shall.

xoxoxo
A

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23 posted 2011-08-29 12:51 PM


what joy and happiness we are blessed with...so many commodities, which we sometimes forget to recognize and appreciate.  Lovely
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24 posted 2011-08-29 01:06 PM


Wonderful words and picture, my friend...
beautifully done.

j.

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