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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-07-13 07:45 AM



we came and went eventually
like passing clouds over a darkened sky
you left your whispers on my shirt again
and gave your words to many others

I won't bother blaming you now
you are a woman it was expected
like the milking of martyr cows
and guzzling their lumpy milk

there are many highways to follow
and they will lead me on too
making promises yet to be built
and be dead ends in the end

but oh those curves, yes, I will use them


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daark

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-07-13 10:38 AM


Absolutely! May as well have fun taking on those curves if you can.

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-07-13 10:43 AM


Thanks JP. Actually they are closing the 405 for a bit so the curves will have my full attention.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2011-07-13 03:10 PM


Take care on those curves...
they can give you a rash mighty quick
if you're not careful...


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-07-13 03:16 PM


Ms Sun. I will just lean into them a bit deeper. Thanks lady.



Margherita
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5 posted 2011-07-13 06:23 PM


I am sure you have great expertise with curves and will lean into them with deep pleasure and passion... making everything as harmonious as can be ... between the three involved, biker, bike and highway.

Captivating.

Love,
M

Namyh
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6 posted 2011-07-13 07:28 PM


Dark Stranger - I love the curves, in a centrifugal kind of way. They send me on a tangent, just like your piece. Thanks DS for letting loose the hounds. Namyh
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2011-07-14 06:25 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend
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namyh, thanks for riding along!!

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