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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said thank you sir for spending the time as if my moments were otherwise employed prior to discovering the depth of your charms that were being revealed for careful scrutiny you were quite an apothecary of temptation wearing those green eyes and some bronze casually distributed between curvatures as if sculpted by some mischievous teasing god I merely took note of your assets in general then began specializing in certain locations allowing my eyes to study those adjoining areas to maintain the proper extremes of covetousness I did maintain some decorum during exploration since you had mentioned discretion was desired so my motives and their mostly rigid reactions were carefully tucked deep within your imagination lest I would become predictable and less interesting ______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are always most interesting, dear D., even if partially predictable I guess! You stir imagination in such a playful way. How nice to enter Pip after a pause and find your sunkissed words! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much lady friend.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmmm what to think.... mmmmmmm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie...you smile me with your comment..thanks lady |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a feeling you could never be quite so predictable... nope, no such feeling like that at all.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...aw...you could always count on me to do some things..thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, sometimes I don't think when I read your poetry. I just feel. Ali-san |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Predictable and less interesting you never could be Mr Daark! Enjoying reading you again RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe ____________ ms r&b....so nice to see you back around..thanks ms |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
You're a unique writer my friend. Your poetry makes me think. Sometimes I run away from the thoughts. Rest assured you are the polar opposite of predictable and thus delightful. Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms M thank you for offering my eyes your comments and thoughts. |
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