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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-07-10 12:37 PM



About You

The songs I sing, the words I write
the how and when, the where and why
they’re all about you.

The caress of the wind, the kiss of the sun
my ups, my downs, my laughter and my frowns,
they’re all about you.

The days, the nights, the quiet afternoons
my past, my future, my present
they’re all about you.

The mistakes, the victories,
my dreams, my desires and my schemes
they’re all about you.

The laughter, the joy, the tears, the pain
my heart, my soul, my breath, my very being
all of them ... they’re all about you.


© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2011-07-10 12:43 PM


fine Romanticism!
Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-07-10 12:53 PM


Thank you very much. I'm nothing if not a romantic.


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-07-10 01:07 PM


I'm lovin' it!
Lori

Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-07-10 01:09 PM


Thank you Lori!!!!!!


Sunshine
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5 posted 2011-07-10 01:55 PM


Very unselfish...thank you!


Balladeer
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6 posted 2011-07-10 07:37 PM


The way I see it is that this poem is all about you, Marcia...
JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-07-10 08:41 PM


Beautiful sentiments and composed perfectly. To have the love of someone who can write these words is the ultimate in life, more precious that diamonds and gold, more refreshing than a spring-fed drink of clear mountain water. Love it.

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-07-12 05:29 PM


It's all about love and you say it beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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9 posted 2011-07-12 07:32 PM


Very beautiful, Marcia!
Word Weaver
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10 posted 2011-07-12 07:32 PM


Thank you dear.


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11 posted 2011-07-12 08:09 PM


Oh wow, wonderful, just wonderful.
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