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easy1
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0 posted 2011-07-10 12:37 PM





Dance tough, I am told:
Art is a living prayer,
Release to be won.
Every day I think that
Someday I will dance again.



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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-07-10 01:09 PM


I like the inspirational quality to this poem. Good write!
Lori

easy1
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2 posted 2011-07-11 04:32 PM


Thank you, Lori, for your kind words.

In retrospect, I can see that this poem does not emphasize nearly enough that art as sincere expression of hopes and ideals, not as "artful" wiles or tricks, really is a form of prayer.

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