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ritualbustander
Junior Member

since 2011-07-09

Posts 10
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2011-07-09 07:12 PM

Self doubt can engulf and enslave
on lock down from the truth
We are good people
and simply we are two
who
can bring out that inner glory
the fire and passion
fire and brimstone
heat to light the world ablaze
a burning kept between two
who
fight for each other
and are there to comfort
when times are tough
the road seems long
two side by side has never been this strong

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-07-09 07:24 PM

Very good mesaage, and a wonderful first post.

Welcome to the blue sea, good poet~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-09 07:30 PM

That's the key to happiness, that few find in their lives.

~ Husbands are chiefly good lovers when they are betraying their wives.--Marilyn Monroe ~

ritualbustander
Junior Member

since 2011-07-09

Posts 10
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2011-07-10 01:04 AM

Hey thanks guys. Literally wrote that today about this beautiful woman in my life who was wonderful enough to share her 600+ posts on here with me.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2011-07-10 01:25 AM

Again, my welcomes and I offer my appreciation to you for sharing.

Alison

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-07-10 12:27 PM

Welcome to the Blue Buffet, you are really gonna like it here. Nice write!
Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2011-07-10 12:35 PM

Wow...she let you into her inner self...nothing is more revealing and mysterious than one's poetry...and it's not always easy to share it with the one you love the most.

Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

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