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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-07-09 06:31 PM

           Unrequited

Only here in the
twilight forest,
where finest thoughts
  and memories
rise and fall as waves
on this sunset mere,
can I speak of your
  infinite charms
with whispered verse
and perfect love …
for you shall never ‘see’ me
by the constant light of any day
  in this passing world
nor among the starlit shadows
  of your dreams.

           --- b. e. adams (7/9/2011)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-07-09 07:21 PM

Enchanting and so lovely, dreampoet.
Took me to a beautiful place in my mind.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-07-10 01:28 AM

Beautiful and sad. You are a dreampoet and we are lucky that you are among us, Bruce.

xoxoxo
Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-07-10 01:54 AM

Very, very beautiful, Bruce.

Owl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-07-10 01:54 PM

I like this, as it gives thought to what
the inner eye might sense, let alone, "see".

Enjoyed this, Sir.

Geodesic
Junior Member

since 2011-06-08

Posts 13
England

5 posted 2011-07-10 06:15 PM

Eloquent. I like the structure too.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2011-07-12 03:32 AM

There's nothing secondhand about this dreamer/poet.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2011-07-13 03:26 AM

excellent, and romantic with some subtle despair, enjoyed

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2011-07-15 01:43 PM

Beautiful poem with real tender true thoughts.Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-07-15 06:08 PM

Beautifully melancholic, dear Bruce! Your poetic whispers are a tender tool of connection ...

Love,
Margherita

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