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mistress of cold springs tavern
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mistress of cold springs tavern |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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her tractor was special, kinda candy coated with chrome tires that could sure throw mud in any contest and she always had words left when the others were nursing their wounds her bricks were always in all the right places and she sure knew how to use them for favors especially the ones that were bent around curves and the ones that blocked any conceivable exits she sipped coffee she had grown at her villa and talked about how if size doesn't matter then what does when you are trying things on or the point of shopping if you aren't wealthy she had slaves at her bar in observant worship waiting for an opportunity to be the chosen one or chosen several if she wanted some variety or a grouping with her as the central attraction when she got off shift right after closing time ________________ daark (highway series) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-08-2011 10:14 AM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This really is nicely written. Juju -Juju |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks juju...bartender at the cold springs... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
FINE writing ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo...I appreciate your reads |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
She sounds wicked - wicked always trumps sweet. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..oh hell yes! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think I knew her in another location.  Strength of steel with a siren song well sung... Great write!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks lady. She does get around. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Dark, I liked your description of this woman. She sounds like a woman who learned to protect herself and not be vulnerable to anyone, shutting out emotion. Ms. Ebony |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ebony I do believe her emotions are fragile enough, but she has learned to leave them in her other body. Thanks ms |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Dark, I commented on your poem but it didn't appear. Forgive me if it appears twice, as I am still learning. I liked this poem. I envisioned a woman who has learned to harden herself to protect herself. Hum...familiar. Ms. Ebony |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Every rednecks' dream woman, D.S. I liked the referance you made to "bricks" enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend Ice....thanks amigo...was kind of fun to unravel.. |
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