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Melt Murmurs |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Oh, for the love of me it remains a mystery Why one would long and linger for my sigh Melt murmurs down my shoulders nape and neck Seeking scent and warmth of dimpled thigh For that is where passion's sent Love's another path close by LGR(C)7/3/11 [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (07-03-2011 08:05 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Lori. You have begun to master the words, and not they you. I love how you put your thoughts together, sometimes with a twinkle in your eyes, sometimes with a half smile, half leer on your mouth. Gotta love it. ~ It's amazing how many women a woman can be. ~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
That is the cleanest bit of sensual poetry I've ever seen. Frighteningly good! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Dear Lori, for what a dear one you must be. I wouldn’t have the courage to post this one … I can’t describe how reading your poems make me feel. But I find them so comforting and consoling, make me smile and fantasize what I might not reveal to anyone. Signed, One of your annonimous admitters  |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhh Lori. What a sensoal imginary ride you take me on ... and then to sleep; but dinner first, okay????? :-----) Daddygoose |
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