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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
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california

0 posted 2011-07-03 05:49 PM



So Simple


I don't want simple. Not yet,
not while I'm still in my first half of life:
or what amount of time contemporaries
allot themselves with each undeserved first breath.
I know children with gray hairs,
and I hold no contempt for finding happiness in sadness,
only contempt for dusted thoughts that wait to settle once again
through learned regimen and due process.
A simple pleasure is a reduction of a complex one
before it dies in its own arms that can no longer support it.
Simplicity is both liberating and confining,
depending on which door you enter from.
The old relish the simple
as it is all hey can salvage
from an aging life being conditioned
to accept what is unacceptable
to the young.


Keep flying to the sun with these gargoyle wings.
Joe Houck


[This message has been edited by Joe Houck (07-03-2011 06:47 PM).]

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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-07-03 07:37 PM


Hey, I'm 65½ (and OH! so proud of it!) and I'll race you up 5 flights of stairs any day - of course, I'll come second, but not as far behind you as you would imagine!  

I can guarantee I have better health than you and for far more years than you (lol, got you good on that last part!) and I don't know anyone simpler or paradoxically as complex as me or my thoughts and aspirations - and my life is full and vibrant and has continually grown more so and more interesting by the day!  

I wouldn't be young again for all the tea in China - it was fun then, but being 65½ is vastly more fun, comfortable, exciting and interesting!  I learn more (and llllllove it!) every day now about all sorts of things, possibly than I learned in a week when I was young!

Learned regimen and due process can be a good thing, though, granted, not always.

Interesting poem, though.  Smiles.

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (07-03-2011 08:08 PM).]

Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
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2 posted 2011-07-03 08:32 PM


Hahahaha!!! I'd probably beat you up the stairs, but I'd also probably puke immediately after.


I agree, Owl. Age is just a number. I was being a little cryptic/vague but with the line "I know children with gray hairs" I was implying that young people lay waste to simplicity and complacency too, perhaps even more than the elderly. I have friends that play video games all day. Nothing else. That to me is the "simpleness" and complacency I wish to avoid even when I'm 65 1/2 (if I make it that far).


OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2011-07-04 05:25 PM


Giggles, Joe - and I wouldn't be sick when I got to the top of the stairs!

I'm glad to hear that you intend to make your life interesting all the way - and I sure hope you make it to 65½ because it is really worth it and is, amongst other things, great fun!

Owl

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