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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-07-03 07:43 AM


I wish I was a little girl,
With a lot of strawberry curls.
I wish I could be that way,
I'd be listening for Santa's sleigh.

I wish I was a little boy,
So little girls I could annoy.
I'd dip those curls into the ink,
And chase you round the roller rink.

We would change places if we could,
It might make us be understood.
I wonder what they'd think of then,
If he was her and she was him.

©July 1, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-07-03 12:13 PM


Therein lies venus and mars, even at a young age they begin to circle around each other while clashing in the midst only to break each others fall.

Ha!!  Love my take, love your poem JP~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-07-03 01:34 PM


Right. Your take is better than my poem, Blues.

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~

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