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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-07-01 07:12 PM


Love Is In The Air

In this scene
among the
cherry blossom trees
she's walking
away from me
as if she
was leaving me...
I feel emptiness,
sadness is inside me
as if I were alone.
I close my eyes
as if to say goodbye,
when I open them
I see her
walking back to me...
when she gets closer
we are both laughing,
and now she has
a precious smile
upon her face,
a few more steps
and we embrace..
we are both aware
that love is
in the air.

JamesLee
01July
2011





[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-02-2011 06:49 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-07-01 07:41 PM


Happy to see it all ended up okay.

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2011-07-08 10:20 PM


would that all 'endings' happened thus !
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2011-07-13 06:50 PM


Thank you Jerry and secondhanddreampoet for the nice responses...James
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