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moaning glass and bamboo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were in your best lady place mind but walking in snowshoes in summer wearing that nothing else that was cooler I pretended to be smooth sand dunes that you would slide down and onto before I turned to stone within you and you said the damn you words again before picking up your toy nuns and running them back to before it was and sitting them proper on their shelves while you washed away their habits along with your lick and stick tattoos you kept the bad ones in a box of moans ___________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-30-2011 08:28 AM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey! I have snowshoes. Won a race in them once - okay, I was nine! I peaked early. Sometimes that 'bad thing box' just has to be opened. Gotta air it all out. Ali-san |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"pretended to be smooth sand dunes that you would slide down and onto before I turned to stone within you" wow completely awesome!!! ... never been good at this sort of thing I may have to try it...I mean this type of poetry ... Okay I think I am blushing now and I am much too old for that!!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe....I can see you winning the race...9? Geeze, nine years ago...who how time flies. _______________ ms King...you are never too old or too young to blush...thanks ms |
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