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As She Pressed |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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AS SHE PRESSED 21 May 2011 As she pressed Send and Receive for the millionth time, she wished, for a moment, that it was as easy as that to bring him back to her . . . but then she realised that something so precious deserved infinitely more than simply pressing an electronic button but then that was before . . . Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A poem of things changing... Yes, "before" was different. One to think about, Diana. enjoyed, as allways. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Do you remember the "unsend" button??!! I loved that little feature once upon a time. Your poem is heartfelt and expressed so well, Lady Owl~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I can absolutely understand this one, Owl. Absolutely. ~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are the moments when one admire then desires then abhors change. Well done, Diane! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ford. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, for your kind words. Yes, change plays a role in the poem - simultaneously a significant and insignificant one. No, Blues, I don’t remember the Unsend button – perhaps at that stage, I hadn’t yet touched computers. It must have been a handy option! Thank you for the sweet things you said. Thanks for your input, Jerry. I am sorry you know what I mean – and I know you know what I mean! Yes, Karilea, I suppose so. Smiles. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady Owl...I can imagine the electric sensations..kewl stuff |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Giggles, Dark. I know you can! Smiles. Owl |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
hmmm, interesting poem swap the he's and she's and this poem would apply today, tonight... to me |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Really touching dear Owl! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sorry to hear that Brad, but glad I could offer indirect empathy through the poem. Thanks, Kat. Glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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