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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2011-06-26 12:58 PM


Dancing Daffodils Alight Alliteration 2011

Spring alight alliteration springing dancing daffodils
Blossoming buds opening to vibrant vivid livid yellows.
Winter weather overcast observing snow retreating dil
In charming cherry budding blossoms melting mellow.

Dance alight aromatic air in fragrant bee breeze nectar
Pollinating pure a world’s wonders in refreshed review.
Ballerina butterflies histrionics wordplay solemn specter,
When haunting hollow-casts release on enlightened views.

Mental wings in flight among cerebral celestial might of insight
Spreading sensual sensitivity into its ultimate prime potential.
Where one joins with Mother Nature’s natural biorhythmic sight
In heartbeats exhaling winter, inhaling spring solace essentials.

Illuminate the soul’s radiance in a effervescence sparkling smile,
Illumination bearing baptismal cleansing clear clarity of conscience.
Sail high with winds walking alive in mind’s magical meditative miles
Feel daffodils, dandelions, and buttercups sensation of a subconscious -

Upon
Dancing Daffodils Alight Alliteration
In divine tranquility
Of being made whole
Within Nature’s love spring womb
By thawing your crust’s winter tomb.

David Lester Young 06/25/11 ©

I hope you dance with this in your heartbeats.

© Copyright 2011 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2011-07-12 04:55 PM


This is magical, dear David. Absolutely captivating.

Love,
Margherita

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