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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-06-23 07:33 AM


perhaps it was the sleeves of dreams
or the dragons that knew your sky
that kept you from closing your eyes
when the wanting woman took your skin

you said she was a secret mostly
but on occasion she came out of you
and repossessed your position
and your lady like fragility too

made you into that place of sinful
seldom committed but craved often
said it made you pant from thirsting
but water was never enough to quench

and your eyes were becoming heavy again

_____________
daark


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-06-23 12:22 PM


There's a lot to be said about
dreams...I'm just glad that they
visit me frequently.

Just like it's good to visit your
words, Sir.

Enjoy the summer!


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-06-23 12:53 PM


ms sun...as long as there is sunshine, the summer will be a pleasure...thanks lady!!
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2011-06-24 09:57 AM


Love your title and the high definition you left behind my eyes.

Dreamy, dude~

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-06-24 10:16 AM


babyblue, thanks for the tancandy coating of your glances
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5 posted 2011-06-24 10:46 AM


Sometimes I just say .. I know this woman.  I think many of us say that - you strike a chord.  Yep, you do.

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You know, morning without a stranger is like a morning without warm diet pepsi.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-06-24 11:19 AM


ms ali-san, warm diet pepsi...geeze you make me want to burp..thanks babe
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