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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2011-06-23 04:07 AM


Reign In The Tears Pain Then Rain In Mists That Heal 2011

Wail inside turmoil that roils in flooding emotion
That quakes in storming sobs baring heartbeat vibrations,
Where one feels senses raked in sharp sword point motion,
Slashed sensations deep within the core chill, quill penetration.

Nail inside that boiling tumultuous volatile vulnerability,
When souls are stripped bare naked to the skeletal frame
Upon hollow caste shadows that rape lost respectability,
Sand castle façade foundation cracks that extinguishes the flame.

Rail inside tattered torn tears of inner might’s fight for perseverance
In mended patchwork quilts of tornadic words sown into tranquility.
That the quagmire of political social warfare scars - heal into coherence,
Upon an ever seeing eye, having been lost, finding the miracle of credibility.

Sail inside the billowing canvas of your divine creation of individuality,
Where the failures are overcome, one by one, with increasing confidence.
That one must write the currents of depression and exhilaration duality
That contrasts the full spectrum of Literature’s Democracy ascendence.

Hail inside God’s gifted prayers of empathy with Freedom’s Civil Liberty passion.
Bail inside to remove the hatred and transplant it with love of life compassion.

Reign In The Tears Pain
Then
Rain In Mists That Heal

David Lester Young 06/21/11 ©

© Copyright 2011 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2011-07-01 07:04 PM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2011-07-12 04:18 PM


Rail inside tattered torn tears of inner might’s fight for perseverance
In mended patchwork quilts of tornadic words sown into tranquility.


You did an amazing job, dear David.

Such a significant write!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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