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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-06-20 09:37 AM

~*~

Golden shaft bobbing
Red winged blackbird clinging tight
Warbling worthiness

~*~

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2011-06-20 04:16 PM

This is delightful, dear Karilea, and I even learned two new words (bobbing and warbling).

Beautiful message.

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-06-20 06:52 PM

I know that place! Grain will soon be gone but the birds will still be here warbling on!
Lori

Sunshine

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3 posted 2011-06-20 08:54 PM

Margherita, that I may have shown you a couple of "new words" simply made my day! I do hope it painted the perfect picture for you!

Lori...thank you, as I know you know...it's a wonder show in a micro-moment. If not now, when? Nothing is left to chance, and everything is timed...and those out of time? Perish.

to you both.

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

4 posted 2011-06-20 09:21 PM

.. yes, Line three intensifies and makes
the entire haiku sing..

Balladeer

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5 posted 2011-06-20 10:34 PM

This is a worthy warble itself!!! Nice, Sunshine...

Sunshine

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6 posted 2011-06-20 10:44 PM

Spiros, you have taught me sincerity within the words;

'Deer, you have taught me many lessons, and less is sometimes more.

Thank you both!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-06-21 06:24 AM

ms sun, so many images enter the brim of this piece....like fingers searching for smooth glass sensations...a lovely capture!

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