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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2011-06-20 12:22 PM



My words will be
the life in me,
the death of me,
what’s left of me.

*Amber

© Copyright 2011 Amber Corcoran - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2011-06-20 01:29 AM


I think many of us will identify.  I'd like to have this on my headstone someday - if I have a headstone.

Like it.
A

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-06-20 04:21 PM


Words echo forever, within us and in the Universe. What a responsibility!

Very good thought (though I would skip the "death").

Love,
Margherita

martiniat8
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3 posted 2011-06-20 05:20 PM


I LIKE it!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-06-20 06:54 PM


Short, sweet and to the point! I like it too!
Lori

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