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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-06-19 12:08 PM



should the moon
retreat forever
behind a darkened sky
and all the stars
fall earthbound
without their
twinkling light
if the sun should
cease to rise
the clouds go
their separate ways
and all the birds
no longer soar
i still will
not forget you
for, in all truth
i am forever yours

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-06-19 12:38 PM


Very romantic and heartfelt. Enjoyed very much!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-06-19 03:03 AM


This expresses very beautifully the profound belief and hope of lovers to be conscious of their love forever and beyond. A feeling of oneness that can't be extinguished by time.

A wish and an affirmation that becomes a gift, dear Faith.

Love,
Margherita

[This message has been edited by Margherita (06-19-2011 05:00 PM).]

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2011-06-19 12:24 PM


such a beautiful romance shared with talent,

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-06-20 06:59 PM


Hey, how did I miss this gem? Another fine piece of work.
Lori

faithmairee
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5 posted 2011-06-20 09:18 PM


Thank you so much, Kat.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
6 posted 2011-06-20 09:20 PM


Dear Margherite-So nice of you to grace my page with your presence.  Thank you for your most welcomed comments.  Thank you for being here.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
7 posted 2011-06-20 09:21 PM


Thank you for your lovely comment, yann...it's always a pleasure to see you've stopped by.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
8 posted 2011-06-20 09:22 PM


Dear Lori-Thank you so much, my friend.  You made my heart smile.

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Balladeer
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9 posted 2011-06-20 10:33 PM


You are quite the romantic, faith! I like that in a woman!! Very nicely done...
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
10 posted 2011-06-21 10:19 AM


yes, an incurable romantic...haha...thanks so much for your wonderful remarks...i appreciate them more than you know...

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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