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Words in the Wind |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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WORDS IN THE WIND 9 June 2011 The echoes in her heart-holes sang his name backwards . . . well, she thought they did but perhaps it was the bareback hoof-songs of her unicorn pounding across the plains, her hands entangled in his glorious mane, her hair flying, as she drank the wind, wild and free. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That's a picture I'd love to see . . . You betcha. ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Jerry. Smiles. When I die, I will gallop my beloved Flicka bareback across the Heavens, and it will probably sound like gentle rolls of thunder. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This just makes me happy that I have never known the difference between fantacy and reality, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Long smiles, Ida. Thank you. Very glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"The echoes in her heart-holes sang his name backwards" ...love that line (and yes, this paints a lovely picture...an extremely beautiful write |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Steaven, especially as you write particularly beautiful poetry yourself. Owl |
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