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Open Poetry #47
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2011-06-08 04:10 PM



A prayer as such
is Please God make compassion
less costly, Thank You.

I am here for you, my friend.
I am here for you, fear not.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-06-08 05:51 PM

Very good. Personal. Soulful and intense.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~
Margherita
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2 posted 2011-06-08 07:15 PM

"Make it less costly or even better ... remove the reasons for compassion, let us just love"

He does show the way, but we get lost in a labyrinth of "considerations" and lose the ability to focus on the priorities.

This tanka is excellent and thought provoking.

Love,
Margherita


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