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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2011-06-07 07:17 PM


My Yobo

My honey is
so nice for me
she thrills me
excites me
satisfy's me.

I'm not saying
that she's perfect
I'm saying there
are so many thing's
about her that I like.

If it was possible
in her heart
and my heart
she would be
my yobo forever.

JamesLee
05June
2011
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-06-07 07:45 PM

Okay, had to search for the definition of yobo, and now that I know that it means I can say this poem used it well.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-06-10 08:04 PM

thanks Jerry for the nice response...I know that I write in a style where it seems that I have ten, but there is only one...James
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