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One with you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * One with you * The forget-me-nots held their breath and bravely offered their smoothness when we choose to stargaze that night. We stretched out, fingers entwined, hearts synchronized their dancing steps souls melted into one glowing globe, brains exchanged light speed impulses, veins were rivers rushing to alien shores where Universal tunes were performed. We inhaled the fragrance of stillness and exhaled remnants of built up tensions imitating the sea’s eternal play of waves. All earthly heaviness left our bodies. The forget-me-nots lifted their heads and pushed us closer towards the stars. We hovered in a place of no attachment immersed in a space of deep contemplation. where filaments of light kept us out of chaos. Our soul smiles erupted into the vast void winged whispers roamed in new sun skies, through shafts of radiance we ascended higher and higher onto a level of pure being. Thoughts tumbled from consciousness sinking temporarily into channels of silence. We held the quiet for long enough to perceive the primordial cosmic breath of harmony. Then we turned to each other and kissed. The forget-me-nots had shared our bliss, each of them put on a knowing smile as they cheerfully waved good-bye. * [This message has been edited by Margherita (06-07-2011 12:59 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Poems such as this has to have been lived to be written in such a personal and unique way. To merge the forget-me-nots' into the fabric of the verses gives it a lasting effect. ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry, for your loving comment. Yes, it has been lived ... intensely so ... but the poetic rendering can go its own fantastic ways of course.  Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
"This whole poem is beautiful Margherita - and this - "We stretched out, fingers entwined, hearts synchronized their dancing steps souls melted into one glowing globe, brains exchanged light speed impulses, veins were rivers rushing to alien shores where Universal tunes were performed." intensely so. Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
(((((Eric))))), thank you from my heart, for coming in here and for your loving appreciation. And for knowing about those higher spheres where such miracles happen. Love you, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely lovely, dear Margherita. Owl |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Really enjoyed this very much. Entwined in each others arms for a moment in time. Making memories that last a lifetime...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You always manage to take a moment, and make it memorable. Bless you, my friend. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Margherita-Just beautiful, Margherita as usual. I love the forget-me-not slant too...i think it really made the poem come alive...great wonderful poem Love, faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautifully romantic! loved it ! Kat >^..^< |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Owl, for stopping by and leaving your loving comment. Yes, dear Paul, some memories linger long. Thank you, for telling me you enjoyed this. Thank you, dear Karilea, it's those moments that become eternal if we live them consciously. Enjoyed your comment! Thank you, dear Faith, for your generous and loving words in appreciation of this write. Dear Karen, thank you so much for enjoying it and telling me so. Love and joy, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Delightful, beautiful and oh, so romantic. I just loved it dear lady. ooxx I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
This one is definately a keeper! Just to dream of an experience such as this is fulfilling! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart, dear Marti, for your loving comment. Dear SimOriah, your generous comment brought me joy, thank you so much. Love, Margherita |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I love this -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
margherita you have such a beautiful soul, I admire the talent expressed in beauty and elevation, the poem has grace and made me dream away, thanks a lot yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear rosepetals, for bringing this one back and for enjoying it. So good to have you visit. Looking forward to your own poetic submissions. Dear Yann, thank you for your generous and loving comment. We are not earthbound, our spirit can fly high and explore untold heights. Isn't it fantastic!? Love, Margherita |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, poetry that writes itself to stay and comfort one's heart forever.. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is romantic with a capital R. I never miss your poetry - I read you with such an ease as your words just wash over me. I love how you write - I think that your gentle spirit marks every word. Did you know that Forget-Me-Nots are Alaska's state flower. Just some trivia for you. Love this and you. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Spiros, for your loving comment. Dear Alison, thank you so much, for your warm reply. And no, I did not know that the Forget-me-Nots are Alaska's national flower. Thank you for telling me. They are enchanting reminders! Love, Margherita |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Thanks Margherita, I always wondered what Heaven was going to be like. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The imagery drifts in a very powerful presentation levitating with your words. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You have captured in words (once again) love in it's universal and eternal splendor as no one else can. You are our constant conduit to the cosmos. Lori |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Lord how I love romantic poetry and you do it so well Margherita. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read and view...James |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Glad I read your poem today, wonderful write. Enjoyed. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita - This brought back memories of long ago moments. Your words made me remember times almost forgotten. This was visual and beautifully crafted as only your poets pen can do thus making this reader 'one with you'. And that definitely puts a Margherita in my day. Thanks M. Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My dear Poet friends, thank you so much for your loving comments that I greatly enjoy! Love, Margherita |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully written... a very pleasureable read. Michael |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, It's been a true pleasure to be thrust into the sensory imagery of your poem. I admire you for being able to put down words with such depth and energy. Your fine poem kept my heart racing and touched me as I read. It is good to read you again! miscellanea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michael, dear Sue, dear Misc, your replies brought me joy, thank you from my heart. Wishing you all a wonderfully creative day! Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Margherita, The love poems you write are magical. Thank you for sharing them, Ms. E |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Another Margherita marvel....enjoyed the read and also the perfect forget-me-nots (who could forget them?) Thank you Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear E. you have blessed me with your diving here. Thank you so much! I love to write LOVE! Dear Phil, so nice to find your loving comment in here. Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Margherita,  You are blessed!! You make writing poetry seem so easy. No exception in this beauty. Grace and Peace be with you. JL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is pure delight... so very beautiful and romantic! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear JL, I so much enjoyed your generous comment and your blessings. Thank you and blessings to you too! Dear Ruth, your turn to dive and surprise me with your loving comment. Thank you so much! Love and joy to both. Margherita |
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