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HippinTrippy
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since 2010-03-26
Posts 103
New York

0 posted 2011-06-05 09:52 PM



I want to write you something
Lord knows I have the time
I want it to be special
But all I can do is rhyme

I want you to know what you mean to me
I want you to have no doubt
Your loving means so much to me
Your love I can't do without

These feelings that I have for you
I wish I could explain
Wanting so badly to find the right words
It almost causes pain

But then I sit and realise
As I write these words to you
There is no reason to dwell on words
You know what I go through

Im hoping to finish this poem
Before I get your call
Knowing when I read it to you
How much deeper we will fall

It almost seems unreal
The feelings we share together
It's only been three months
And I feel I've known you forever

I am nearly in a dreaming-state
At the time of writing this
Though every thought of you is like a dream
Full of love and happiness

The thought of being without you
Is near to much to bare
So know that I mean this with heart and soul
I will always be there

Through any ups or downs
That we may go through
My words, thoughts and feelings
Will always remain true.

One of these days
I'll write you a poem
That doesn't rhyme so much
But these rhymes they just keep coming back
Like a turd that will not flush

I don't mean to get off topic
But this I have to say
This maybe the only love poem
With the word turd in it -
Written to this day

But I love to hear that giggle
That laugh that is so sweet
A sound that could mend the saddest of hearts
And make the strongest of men grow weak

It's time for me to wrap this up
For I am running out of pages
Just know that you deserve more love
Than even Shakespear's inspired -
Through the ages

These rhymes may seem a little childish
Or even a bit nursery
I just wanted a special way
To say Happy Anniversary.

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

© Copyright 2011 Joshua Griffin - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-06-05 10:04 PM


Nice thoughts for the love of your life . . .

I like your signature . . .

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

HippinTrippy
Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103
New York
2 posted 2011-06-05 10:15 PM


Thank you kindly =)
faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-06-05 10:17 PM


yep, that's love i enjoyed your poem a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

HippinTrippy
Member
since 2010-03-26
Posts 103
New York
4 posted 2011-06-05 11:09 PM


Thank you Faith =)
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