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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-06-05 09:06 AM


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With each cup
Less light
More beautiful


Love—
The serving girl
With another jar


In her eyes
Like golden coins—
I’m a hero


Ah who put this horse
In front of the house
And under my shoe


In the back
Taking a pee
Three shoguns
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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (06-05-2011 12:12 PM).]

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Duck1946
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since 2011-05-16
Posts 84
Nebraska
1 posted 2011-06-05 06:00 PM


Very Nice!
I like your style

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