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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-06-05 08:21 AM


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Adam was lonely
So God in His glory
Created woman

The old books tell us
That Lilith was her name

It wasn’t that long
Before Adam was down
For Lilith informed him
He wasn’t much of a man

He wasn’t a lion
He couldn’t fly

As time went on
Adam grew sullen
Until God in His wisdom
With a sweep of His hand
Sent Lilith on her way

And then there was Eve
And Adam was happy

And then came the apple
But that’s another story


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-06-05 08:22 AM


Hahahahahaha!!! It's that OTHER story that's the killer.

~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-06-05 12:26 PM


Maybe Eve was what they call passive Aggressive.
                              Ida

AlCowie
Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92
London, UK
3 posted 2011-06-05 12:33 PM


Ah yes, we've all had a Lileth, would be nice to have an Eve, apple notwithstanding!
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