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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2011-06-04 09:33 PM



Winter Young

I’m feeling kinda “Winter Young”
As the days go passing by
Think about things, undone
And some things, I ask, “Why?”

“Winter Young” should be defined
As, the declining years
When, you still have laughs inside
And haven’t shed all of your tears.

I’m feeling kinda “Winter Young”
As, the nights come and pass
When I know, like all of us
It could well, be, my last.

All people don’t see “Winter Young”
They are, too quickly gone away
Like all those “Young”, we lose to war
In those games, we People, play!

I’m feeling kinda “Winter Young”
Lasted, longer, than I should
I know, I’ve done a lot of bad
But I hope, I’ve done some good?

“Winter Young”, will come and go
Then, there will be no more
And no one knows what lay ahead
Once, we pass through, that “Door”?

Del “Abe” Jones
06.04.2011


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-06-05 04:48 AM


Beautiful and profound, dear Del Abe! I love your expression "Winter Young" and how you weave your thoughts around this concept.

Indeed no one knows, but I trust we will "make it through the gates" just like all those who went before us. I love the term "transition" as it contains a new destination.

Enjoy your "Winter Young" time!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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