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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-06-02 02:36 PM



Berries and Butterflies

We picked berries that summer
carefully laying them in the bucket
as grasshoppers jumped to ride our skirts
and a purple butterfly danced just in front of us

Stopping to admire Mrs. Jenkins' flower garden
we hastened on our way when she yelled at us,
"You stay away from my flowers. You hear? Scoot!|
A mean woman she was and we knew
butterflies would never dance for her.

Skipping past Mr.Crawford's cornfield we saw it
just about ready for harvest a good yield it would be
Mama would make us wear old shirts on backwards
to cover our dresses from the dripping butter
running down our fingers from the choice ones she'd boil up
the others she'd use for relish making to sell at the Fair.

Excited to show Mama how many berries we picked
we ran into the kitchen and got yelled at for getting stains
on our clothes just as a grasshopper jumped off my skirt
and Mama starting swatting and yelling louder and louder
while it jumped and jumped just out of her reach
and we wondered about Mama and dancing butterflies






© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-06-02 03:23 PM


Hah! Maybe the butterfly would never dance for Mama either. I can taste that fresh boiled corn and salt and pepper, with homemade butter dripping down my chin. Get out of my way.

~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-06-02 03:40 PM


I hope you don't mind, Marcia, but I was there too, with you and your sibling/s picking berries and the purple butterfly and enjoying Mrs Jenkins' colourful garden flowers and gazing in the sunshine at the good crop of what we call mealies in South Africa,and the butterflies and grasshoppers and the berries and the buttered corn/mealies and I was just as happy as you that the grasshopper escaped your Mama, and as our spirits did too - well, they almost did.

Owl

Word Weaver
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3 posted 2011-06-02 04:50 PM


I hoped the poem would come across visually and your lovely comments tell me it does. You're welcome to join in on our adventures at any time. One problem - I'm an only child :-)))


Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-06-02 04:52 PM


Jerry, I hate to tell you but you're drooling.


ice
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since 2003-05-17
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5 posted 2011-06-02 07:32 PM


Simply beautiful...

It reminds me of a story that Garrison Keillor might tell about berry picking around Lake Wobegon..love it.

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
6 posted 2011-06-02 09:48 PM


very beautiful, indeed....this reminds me of when i was a child and went berry picking with my sisters...thanks for the wonderful memories...

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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