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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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Michigan

0 posted 2011-06-01 01:46 PM



She had her skirt from her mother
That said I love the way your hair
Water under the sand

Hey, Emily
Your eyes are coming through me, again
That long white shadow of yours
Is starting to become the neighborhoods

Her five fingers
Calling each letter of her name
For the city to hear

Emily heard her shadow was nearby
But the bells of the southern church
Never said a word

Emily touching her right side
Like the low bridge of autumns wind
Waiting for winter to begin.

© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2011-06-04 05:25 PM


She reads just a bit like a drunkard's guardian angel on a lake effect snow day, yay.

Tomer, I do suggest that you somehow get these poems published. Yours is a talent certainly worthy of this.

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-06-10 12:28 PM


Easy, your comments bring a smile and are taken to heart.  I will undoubtedly try.  Nothing brings me more pleasure than writing.  Take care.

Cheers

Tomer

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