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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2011-05-30 02:56 PM


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Tulips—No interest
In bayonets

Antique mall


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Brian James
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since 2005-06-26
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1 posted 2011-05-30 04:02 PM


Achilles, the hero, moping in his tent, not wanting to fight.  But when he finally does, that's when the war is won at last.

I'm trying to bridge the title and the poem.  I guess it has to do with that, the hero in repose while a war rages around him.  Choosing peace over war.  The title almost makes the poem sound a little sarcastic.

I guess I don't really know what to make of this.  I may have misinterpreted the title, but it seems a bit like a critique of the young who take peacetime for granted.  I could be and am probably very wrong.

Thanks for giving my brain a stretch.

Brian

"To me, the thing that art does for life is to clean it, to strip it to form."
~Robert Frost

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2011-05-31 12:23 PM


To love tulips more than bayonets is a very virile "weakness" ...

Enjoyed this.

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