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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-05-30 02:13 PM




Juncture

Late at night, alone
She walks the quiet avenue
Erect and proud with an air about her
She stops at an appealing spot
Orders a drink and listens
Through the open door
To the mournful sounds of a saxophone
In a club across the street.

Finishing his gig for the night
He carefully cleans and puts away
What has become his life
The pure essence of the man
Then joins the others for one tall frosty one

He leaves the club turning at the corner
And with his saxophone held close
Heads down the late night street
To his one-room flat and more nothing.

She also leaves heading back
down the quiet avenue.
They meet at the corner, exchange smiles
She feels her heart skip a beat
Then thinks about her flight in the morning
He thinks about her and then
about tomorrow's promising audition.

Both stop to gaze in shop windows
Obligations over temptation battle within as
They continue on their separate ways
The now quiet night shudders as
Destiny screams at their rejection.

©Copyright
Marcia Miller-Twiford




© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-05-30 02:19 PM


Nice write.

~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-30-2011 04:38 PM).]

Brian James
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2 posted 2011-05-30 03:45 PM


Really beautiful.  This is my favourite kind of poetry... storytelling with occasional, epigrammatic take-away lines.  My favourites are "more nothing" and "obligations over temptation battle within."

Missed opportunities are the stuff of poetry.  I can relate and I'm sure a lot of people can.  Life's little "what ifs" linger and often inspire.  I'll try to keep my eyes peeled and not let the next one that comes my way pass by.

Again, beautiful poem.  I may want to read this again in the future so I'm adding it to my library.  I'll read more of your poetry.

"To me, the thing that art does for life is to clean it, to strip it to form."
~Robert Frost

Word Weaver
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3 posted 2011-05-30 03:50 PM


Thank you Brian. I hope you enjoy what you do read.


secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2011-05-30 07:22 PM


VERY well done!  fine 'slice of life' impression!!
Margherita
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5 posted 2011-05-31 09:25 AM


Excellent work, dear Marcia!

I agree with Brian that this poem calls out to be read more than once.

Brava!

Love,
Margherita

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