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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2011-05-25 04:38 PM



remaining still
I remember now
how sometimes
it was hard to listen
and I heard a pen drop
and thought that
the floor must have cracked
and you were standing there
waiting for me to mend my own heart

~~~kingsangel~~~

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-05-25 08:54 PM


Right in your special form is this one. I have quite enjoyed reading you this evening. thank you.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

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2 posted 2011-05-26 02:46 AM


Julie Ann,

It's good to see you back when you pop in.  I always enjoy your poetry.

Alison

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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3 posted 2011-05-26 05:55 AM


always a pleasure to see you
with your heart on ms...

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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4 posted 2011-06-01 10:52 PM


Thank you for the replies ,,,, I think I am getting my rhyme and reason back....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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