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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-05-24 12:35 PM




Monday Thru Friday

The saddest sound...
Your car pulling out of the driveway
Each morning

The sweetest sound...
Your keys tossed onto the counter
Each evening



© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-05-24 01:00 PM


Lookout weekend!!!

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

Word Weaver
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2 posted 2011-05-24 01:07 PM


LOL. Bring it on!

Thanks Jerry


jwesley
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3 posted 2011-05-24 02:06 PM


Well said!!  Works two ways too...from your perspective, and, from (my) perspective as I leave and return ....

Cool,

j.

Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-05-24 02:36 PM


Glad you liked it J.


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5 posted 2011-05-26 02:43 AM


Bet the keys are not the only things tossed aside.  Like this one a lot.

Alison

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6 posted 2011-05-29 09:38 AM


Lovely, succinct Romanticism !!
Word Weaver
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7 posted 2011-05-29 02:30 PM


Alison and secondhandpoet,

Thank you both for reading and commenting.

My appreciation runneth over.

Marcia



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