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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-05-23 11:20 AM


SWANSONG
22 May 2011

Tangible sadness
feathered the grace of their dance
in their last embrace.

Owl

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2011-05-23 11:39 AM


beautiful and luminous, enjoyed it diana

yann

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-05-23 11:40 AM


lady Owl..

but they remained swans

it seems..enjoyed your pen ms

OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-05-23 11:50 AM


Thank you, Yann.

Yes, Dark, yes, thinking about it, I see you are right.  That is good, I would think.  Smiles.

Owl

ice
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4 posted 2011-05-24 08:56 PM


Back to the top with these thoughts-words;
More need to read them.

OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-05-25 04:45 PM


Thank you, Ford, for your kindness and kind comments.

Owl

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