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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-05-21 02:11 AM



SORRY’S TOUCH
20 May 2011

It knifes me
that you are hurting
because our blend
was blurred
in the night flying.
Take my sorry
and read my throbbing heart again
in the bright of day
and let the kind sun
warm-whisper to you
what you mean to me
and whom I know
you to be.

Owl

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-05-21 11:58 AM


You are the kind sun that whispers beautifully, dear Owl.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-05-21 12:06 PM


Thank you, my dear friend, Margherita.  Smiles.

Owl

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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3 posted 2011-05-21 04:42 PM


To apologize, to forgive, to say I'm sorry
all on the road to a higher ground.
We are all human , sometimes it is so hard
to remember.
I really did love this.

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2011-05-21 06:04 PM



Thank you, EmmaRose.  It is the only way.  If one has hurt somebody, no matter whom, one needs to and should want to apologise.

Owl

ethome
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5 posted 2011-05-21 11:47 PM


Your emotional honesty is a credit to your fine writing Diana.
Uncovering the spin off of truth is fodder for real quality writing like this.

Eric

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-05-22 07:08 AM


lady owl....your tender is lovely..
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2011-05-22 05:15 PM


I'd most assuredly like to find that

warm-whispering,kind sun !!

OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-05-23 11:25 AM


Thank you, Eric for your kind words.

Thank you, Dark, for your exquisite reply.

I hope you do, Bruce.

Owl

2islander2
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9 posted 2011-05-23 11:36 AM


beautiful Owl, these are lovely words and a very attentionnate message,

have a nice day

yann

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-05-23 03:54 PM


Thank you, Yann.  Your kind words are much appreciated and very well timed.

Owl

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2011-05-25 10:58 PM


This touch of "sorry" should fix anything, Diana.
                              Ida

OwlSA
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12 posted 2011-05-26 02:39 PM


Thank you, Ida.  It almost did.

Owl

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