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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-05-20 09:21 PM



TEACH ME
20 May 2011

Teach me
what hurts you
and I will teach you
to forgive me

Owl

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ice
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1 posted 2011-05-20 09:25 PM


Let me be the first to say this is amazing, an amazing proverb..the best I have read in a long time..Owl, you are truly wise.:-)
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-05-20 10:59 PM


I like the concept.

~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~

OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-05-21 02:05 AM


Thank you, Jerry.

Owl

OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-05-21 06:10 AM


Oops, Ford.  I thought I had replied to you.  Thank you for your kind words.

Owl

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5 posted 2011-05-26 02:41 AM


I like how your powerful message is framed in simplicity. Good job, Owly one.

A

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6 posted 2011-05-26 03:43 AM


we always hurt the ones we love huh?
Good little write!

OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-05-26 12:34 PM


Something like that, Dixie.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Owl

OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-05-26 02:32 PM


Oops, Alison.  I missed your reply.  Thank you, too, for your kind words.

Owl

2islander2
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9 posted 2011-05-27 10:56 AM


hi diana, the world should work that way, with confidence and dialogue, thanks for the deep of the poem,

yann

OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-05-27 11:06 AM


Yes, Yann!  You are so right!  Things are a lot simpler than we silly people make them.  Look at the animals.  They get it right!  

Confidence and dialogue works a lot more often than we think it would.  I have seen that for myself many times.  It should always be our first attempt.  If both parties are willing, it makes it so much easier.

Owl

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11 posted 2011-05-27 06:17 PM


Diana...Think what a peaceful world this would be if we all lived by those words.  Hugs!
OwlSA
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12 posted 2011-05-27 08:17 PM


Thank you Martie for your reply.  If everyone took the trouble to understand what peace is, want it and strive for it, the world would still not be perfect, but nevertheless a much better place.  It is so much simpler and more possible than one would think.  Smiles and hugs.

Owl

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13 posted 2011-06-06 01:19 PM


~*~there is something consoling in such honesty~*~

~always a pleasure to read, Owl*

             

OwlSA
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14 posted 2011-06-06 07:08 PM


Thank you, Belle.

Owl

katahdin
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15 posted 2011-06-06 08:47 PM


Wow you said soo much in just a few words!
Kat >^..^<

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16 posted 2011-06-06 10:25 PM


i agree with everyone else...this is wonderful!!!

Love,


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
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17 posted 2011-06-07 03:47 PM


Thank you, Kat and Faith for your kind warm words.  Smiles.

Owl

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