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Abe
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0 posted 2011-05-19 08:14 PM



When You Wake Unto the Day

When you wake unto the day
I hope, it’s warm and bright
Hope it takes away the chill
That, creeps in through the night.

If I could reach out to the Sun
I’d hold it, right over you
To turn off those feelings
When, you’re feeling blue.

I’d do it for everyone
If, it were in my power
Nobody else, would have the blues
To sweet, that taste of sour.

But alas, all I can do
Is, to try to keep on going
But, I couldn’t, bid, “Adieu!”
Without all of you, knowing!

05.19.2011



Del "Abe" Jones
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1 posted 2011-05-20 01:43 AM


Abe,

I hope this is not a goodbye to us.  I would miss you, you know.  

Alison

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-05-20 08:28 AM


quote:
If I could reach out to the Sun
I’d hold it, right over you
To turn off those feelings
When, you’re feeling blue.



So lovely, dear Del-Abe! Thank you for this warm and kind poetic message.

Love,
Margherita

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