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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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0 posted 2011-05-18 02:17 PM


I feel
gray today as the clouds
cast full shadows on concrete
no tears of blue yet to bring
forth the smell of wet green's
browns and purples
that I love dearly to make
me feel yellow inside. Like the sun
light wishing to pierce the
gray away instead of fading
behind the blackness or was it
pale. Like my expression
with no red, orange or pink
blank as a paper
with no pictures
or words. I don't mind
gray at all seem like
a silent person who's
at peace, calm. Until flash
of white silver breaks it's
silence bringing gallons of
bluish green,
a redish scencery that
brings me to feel a
very sickly yellow green.
Only hoping for the gray,
the yellow to return
before I feel white
like a ghost.


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-05-18 08:55 PM


Very colorful and expressive poem here.

Like this~

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2011-05-19 02:25 AM


This was a very colorful read and I enjoyed it much. I also feel colors and associate colors to things, feelings or days.

Nicely done.

Love,
Margherita

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