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Margherita
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0 posted 2011-05-18 10:13 AM



     


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Fulfilment


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Among the countless destinations

your yearning heart might desire

on this spectacular Earth

or on some far away star system

beckoning from the vastness of space,

your all knowing inner voice might suggest

that deepest heavenly ecstasy

is nowhere as overwhelmingly intense

as it is in the all embracing passion

of our souls fused into one

intertwined from the beginning of time

sailing together across forever.
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© Copyright 2011 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-05-18 10:35 AM


Awsome! Simply awsome, I love it!
Lori

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2 posted 2011-05-18 10:43 AM


Beautifully done Margherita. Full sails of the heart.
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3 posted 2011-05-18 11:02 AM


enjoyed this fusion ms mar...
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-05-18 12:28 PM


I quite enjoyed this aspect of the joining all as one concept to a point. When you get to this process the individual is not needed because everything has been worked out to the point of not needed distractions, only complete peace and obedience.

~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-05-19 02:08 AM


Thank you so much, dear Lori, for your generous and loving comment!

Dear Bluesy, thank you, I always enjoy so much your visits and your heartfelt replies.

Thank you, dear D., for taking the time to read this and for enjoying the fusion.

Dear Jerry, thank you for your thoughtful reply. The awareness of being One with All there is brings our lives into a clearer focus where Love reigns and where true bliss and freedom can be fully experienced and expressed and shared.

Love to all.
Margherita  

ice
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6 posted 2011-05-19 07:56 AM




M
The picture , to me is like a great parabolic movement through time and space continuum, The different colors are portrayed nicely in the poem..These are the colors of "ohm"-“parnava,” the eternal.

White, being the beginning of "countless destinations" a compilation/compaction of all human emotions. They also represent to me the color of pure truth.

The purples and reds and oranges suggest passion, trailing along behind that truth.

"your all knowing inner voice might suggest
that deepest heavenly ecstasy
is nowhere as overwhelmingly intense
as it is in the all embracing passion
of our souls fused into one"

Those are the passions, those are the realities of that universal "truth"

And if you believe the universe is parabolic, and not reciprocating, then you believe in the last lines...

"intertwined from the beginning of time
sailing together across forever."

Thoroughly enjoyed
f

Margherita
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7 posted 2011-05-19 10:11 AM


Thank you, dear Ford, for this generous and interesting comment! Highly enjoyed it. And it looks like I found the perfect picture to go with my thoughts ...

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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8 posted 2011-05-19 11:34 AM


Hi Margherita, I adore the poem, its beautiful message and expression, this is enlightning and superb, very well crafted

love

yann

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9 posted 2011-05-19 12:53 PM


Margherita...To hear the inner voice is to glimpse forever filled and filling.  What a wonderful poem!
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2011-05-19 07:44 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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11 posted 2011-05-20 02:10 AM


Margherita,

I love where you take with your poetry.  I have seen the universe, touched love, glimpsed faith and have been mesmerized by the beauty that you share with us.

Thank you.  

Love,
Alison

Margherita
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12 posted 2011-05-21 04:25 AM


Dear Yann, thank you so much for your loving comment dipped in kindness.

Dear Martie, such a generous and beautiful comment increases the current of love that makes soaring possible. Thank you so much!

Thank you, dear James, for finding pleasure in reading. It feels good to bring  a little bit of joy.

Dear lovely Alison, your hovering over my words for enough time to stir your own wings is a real delight. Thank you from my heart.

Love and joy to all.
Margherita

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