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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2011-05-17 12:41 PM


The other day two objects
together side by side
stood happily half empty
and gazed as lovers do
into two blue eyes.

I paid them no mind
having imbibed enough
to ignore their quiet vigil
until suddenly the little one
sidled up to my dinner plate
and clinked it like a toast
to the invisible.

I noticed and paid homage
and listened attentively
but silence always follows
actions of the lifeless.

Let it be, let it be and so I left as me
because nought to do, nought to feel,
and nought to think or say
to a little silver milk jug
pushed on a walk-about.

In retrospect beware perhaps
lest, oh, lest we find ourselves  
forever attached to
the force behind a milk jug!  

Helen / 17 May 2011


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-05-18 04:39 AM


Never under-estimate a milk jug and the force behind! I enjoyed this much, dear Helen. Even a milk jug is alive when we think that it is made of atoms, in which the electrons orbit at high speed around its nucleus ...

Always there is reason to wonder and to increase our awareness and you do it beautifully.

Love,
Margherita


Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2011-05-18 03:51 PM


Thanks Margherita.  I wouldn't dream of underestimating "the force behind" but it needs to ... grow up and stop playing games and then as long as it is behind its force is somewhat diminished in the mind of one who now can be dismissive. Something like crying wolf too many times.  

Love
Helen  

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