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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you had your hands on your shirt there where my eyes wanted to be fingers and it took some time to read you slowly and out loud, without saying there were lovely places hidden too and when you turned around slowly swaying in some sensual sighing just far enough to remain almost distant I will remember those curves of you more than some highways I have chosen and when you leaned into my leather just to be friendly against my buttons I wanted to leave then before I couldn't _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling on you... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
10 to 1 you stayed. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
there were lovely places hidden too and when you turned around slowly swaying in some sensual sighing just far enough to remain almost distant ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That just about wraps it up. Loving this, and those hidden places where your mind goes. Warm thoughful hugs you, dude~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you lady ____________ jp..nope..I went, but look back often, thanks guy ________________ babyblue..thanks for the hearteyes on babe. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Dark. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you lady Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Now that's some declaration! A gift that remains even if you left. Impressive use of words. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I will remember those curves of you more than some highways I have chosen impressive, excellent yann |
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Capricious Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 89California, USA |
Your writing always feels like a journey. Thanks for having me along. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady ____________ thanks yann, I appreciate you _______________ thanks so much Cap' you are welcome anytime |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Yes, a travelin' man. Your poetry language loves to double back, especially since you have a flair for letting your fingers do the walking. (talking?) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you kl..you smile me how you read the windows open |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
These are the moments that pass through everymans life..then dissapear into our inner beings..they are stored, and sometimes rise to the surface...in times like when you sat down to write this poem, and in times when I sat down to read it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend ice...very true...little snapshot moments when we all see the same sky..thanks !! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, you offer us something really special with your poetry. We get to get a glimpse of what you see with your eyes and your imagination. I think this makes you pretty darn special. Well, take the think out of that sentence and put in know and I'll be right on! Thank you, DABCQ. A(li-san) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms A..(li-san, thank you for your sweet wurds.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I've leaned into a memory or two and found the smile I felt, still alive and well. I may not always reply, but I do always enjoy reading you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie...you are my favorite neighbor..thank you for the glance dances |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Did you really want to leave or just turn around? Beautiful play through imaginative ambiguity. Zoom Zoom Zoom.... Love it! Lyle Jus love it! smile.... Eric |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Still smooth, Mr. Dark...this be understated and divine  A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Eric...yes I did turn away...one of the few times..thanks _________________ Amary' thanks so much my friend |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Nice pespective of a man admiring a women, I could picture your eyes turning into fingers and you escaping before you couldn't get away....I have missed reading your poetry I will have to be sure to make time for pip more often!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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